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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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sometimes I think when you are gone even as i finger linger memory repeats as song-- my lips? betray me. i am singer... my eyes graze in "far-away" in gaze of bovinity. my feet walk toward a trough in promise of serenity... There I feed, as sun goes down. There I'll drink--'till wobbled knees be only things I can count on... two-faced in duality. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
If I'm not missing the mark, methinks we all feed from the same trough now and again. Some more than others, I'm sure. What's a metaphor? (old joke, I'm sorry, you know the cow thing...) duhbrain |
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paper doll Member
since 2002-08-04
Posts 133Floating on Uncertainty |
Not to be cliche in my reply to a "dark" poem but this is very deep. I liked your word usage because for once someone is using them in the right context! The overall theme was very well explored and required a decent amount of brain power to figure out so I thank you for that. Very much enjoyed so thanks for posting, Serenity.  ~M Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
feedin on the same thing round here sis... will miss your purdy words...see you when I get back!!! much love D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
That's why the bored are slaughtered into hamburgers. (or something) Mike As patterns seem to form |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ROFLMAO...okay..y'caught me lurking! heh heh Ha!!! OMIGOD...that's funny, mike...damn.  |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
This reminded me of sheep or pigs If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
A fascinating poem with many interesting literary devices. I like the wobbled knees and the two-faced in duality parts. Good job and thankyou for sharing. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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