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Chameleon
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0 posted 2002-08-15 07:54 PM



Dr Johnnie, Doe!
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Clink-clank snaps the freezer door.
As John pulls my carcass fills the air.
He found my mouth and eyes stitched with wire.
As he continues to separate my estranged lips.

As I scream...to let off steam.
As he jerks , as if it were a bad dream.

Removing the scented candlewax from my ears.
My face drops from Dr Johns tears.
I ask 'now, can i see your eyes?'

I hear him scream...
As if it were a bad dream.

Just right after i could see, my sight dialates to the dim fluroscent light.
John denies ' must be imagining'
As i sit up and ask 'May I please go'?

So wide eyed he screamed
I said 'its a bad dream'.

To let off steam....
In return, i just screamed.
In return, i just screamed.

© Copyright 2002 Nicholas Hall - All Rights Reserved
Chameleon
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since 2002-08-07
Posts 99
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1 posted 2002-08-20 01:57 AM


I hate it, it sucks.
Chameleon
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since 2002-08-07
Posts 99
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2 posted 2002-09-01 07:33 AM


man give it up, your not getting encouragement from me...
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