Dark Poetry #3 |
What would you do |
MissunderstoodGrrl Junior Member
since 2002-08-24
Posts 27Ontario, Canada |
What would you do if all your life you just sat and cried always forcing a smile never having any pride What would you do if everyday you woke up wishing you were dead Not wanting to open your eyes ever again Never wanting to leave your bed What would you do if no one around you understood all of them not seeing you hurting inside to understand...i know they never could What would you do if you lost me if i left this earth and left you behind maybe then you would see What would you do when you walk around and i'm not there your all alone would you tell me its not fair What would you do if i said i didnt care that i like to see you hurting would you just sit and stare What would you do wheb you realize you did it it was you who pushed me over the edge maybe then you would care just a little bit What would you do if it was you and not me if you were dead and i was alive i know then you'd finally see What would you do i think you should take time and look around open your eyes and see...PLEASE before they bury me underground |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Welcome to PiP and the "Dark" Forum, Grrl. You've written well on a subject that everyone knows and nearly everyone feels at some time in their life. But not everyone explores this in verse. Perhaps they should. Keep up with your writing. It's good for ya. ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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dj29 Junior Member
since 2002-08-19
Posts 13Florida |
lovely imagery... welcome to Passions youll like it here I loved the poem it is well written with feeling... hope to read more from you dj29 "I still believe, in spite of everything, that people are truly good at heart" ~Anne Frank, Diary entry from 15 July 1944. |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
what would you do if i said i've written these words and thought these thoughts and hurt these hurts? there are those in this life that don't give a damn about you and will walk you over the edge with a smile... you just have find someone else to walk with. someone you can trust. like yourself for starters. great entrance. reminds me of...well, me. enjoy your stay here. it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Good good! I liked it much! -Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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