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dj29 Junior Member
since 2002-08-19
Posts 13Florida |
Cant you see me dieing cant you feel my pain Dont you hear me cry'in Its enough to drive me insane all I wanted was a great life now i see its here all the things i had to sacrifice and noone seems to care now i hope to live on through this pain inside to me it seems to be a con on this crazy ride that we call life dont you care about me or do you stab me with the knife right through the heart...oh cant you see that its in PIECES already all i ever seemed to of wanted is for people to love me now i know all is said and i better go cause you see me cry'in and you seem to know that inside im die'in so if i say im fine then you know im lie'in and the pain will remain mine........... |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Hey there Danny, great job here on your first post on the blue pages.  Beautifully done. Hooray I say  You'll love it around here. Jenn Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
"A con on this crazy ride" Indeed! A nice, eloquent piece. Thanks for sharing! "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Too true, you've amazed me again. If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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E New Member
since 2002-08-19
Posts 7between the rouge |
Spacing it out had me lingering off... other than that.. smashing. Welcome Ariel was always my favorite babe. |
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