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WhileIWasGone
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since 2002-07-18
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0 posted 2002-08-21 01:05 PM



See ya

kiss
my flame as it
scorches one more
lick across your
lips, leaving your
tongue to
run across my
good-bye


DeaDiAmore

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bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-08-21 01:13 PM


Hope that's only a poetic see ya, not a forum see ya. It reminds me of a poem I wrote called "Kissing my goodbye." I wish I remembered how it went. Maybe I'll find it and post it tomorrow?

Incidentally, I tried to e-mail you for a few days, and each time, your server kicked back my e-mail saying nothing doing. Rats...

Mike

WhileIWasGone
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since 2002-07-18
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2 posted 2002-08-21 01:16 PM


Hey....thanks for the reply...
E mail me at MozartsSweety@aol.com

Grrrrr I forgot to tell you I have a new
e mail address...sorry.

DeaDiAmore

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
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Moved from a shack to a barn
3 posted 2002-08-21 01:51 PM


Short, Sweet, as goodbyes should be.


ti amo
~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".      

~wranx~

brian sites
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since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa
4 posted 2002-08-21 02:19 PM


you can't leave us
with just these
polished
glowing
gems
we need the exquisite setting-you
so that they flash on our fingers
and dazzle as we type

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

Moon Dust
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5 posted 2002-08-21 05:23 PM


what a way to say goodbye , but I hope not to us

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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