Dark Poetry #3 |
hunger |
heysara New Member
since 2002-08-08
Posts 8 |
asphyxiate, strangle, gag, cut choke me until i suffocate cancer, tumor, spread, sputter for i am nothing without you only death and decaying mounds of bone red and black and brown and pain your control has washed over me like beautiful acid consuming my breast gnashing its teeth hard against my neck my hunger for you is too dark to shroud and too engulfing to swallow |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
Your Imagery was Captivating; Welcome to Passions...I look forward to more ~Rayne One day Men will look back & say |
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anawnda Member
since 2002-07-26
Posts 113 |
ive been trying to put into words what i feel and somehow i just cant organize everything into a poem, thanks for doing this!!!! i love it * you can hurt me...with your bare hands,or |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Heysara, Welcome to Passions. There is a lot of truth in this writing, and it sounds as if there is a struggle, first hand. Looking forward to reading more from you. Karilea |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
One of your friends, Sara? Since the poem can be read as someone battling cancer, it can stay, heysara. I like your imagery and tough, taut words. Welcome to PIP. I'm looking forward to see what you have in store for Dark. [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (08-09-2002 01:49 PM).] |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Bailee? Is that you? Either way, this is a good poem. (if this is bailee, 'i told you so!') Hope you keep writing in dark. -Sara ...oh, sorry. I thought you were bailee... [This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (08-09-2002 07:47 PM).] |
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heysara New Member
since 2002-08-08
Posts 8 |
Hey everyone- Thanks for commenting on the poem. It's always a little nerve-wracking (at least for me) to share personal writing with others, so thanks for being kind. Anyway, to let everyone here know a little bit about me, my name is Sara, I'm from NC, and I'm a senior in high school. I look forward to future interactions with you all. ~Sara |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
wow i like it. Welcome to passions and the Dark forum, I hope to see more. If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Hey Sara...grins... this is a touch subject to pen...and you did well...the sharp edge has to be there, I think, to get the emotion across... *clapping* for the moderator...GO MIKEY!!! Welcome to dark, be sure to check out our other forums as well!!! take care you!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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