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moshpit
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0 posted 2002-08-08 09:10 PM



It's your turn to pick a movie.
Some flick you want to show me.
No, I don't want to watch a weepie one tonight.

Pick the books you want to borrow.
But I won't be here tomorrow,
Just leave it there before you catch the bus tonight.

Don't you go there wasting time.
I don't need to tell you one more time.

Outside the rain is falling.
Inside the walls we're searching.
Just wondering if you wanted to stay for just a while.

I guess the times are changing
While our deepest thoughts remaining
I'm sure the storm will clear if we wait for just a while.

Don't you go there wasting time.
I don't need to tell you one more time.

Say you will
Spin around when I call your name.
Say you will
Spin around and I'll do the same.
Say you will
Spin around
Say you will

So, how is little Dana?
I'm pretty sure you wanna
Spend some time with her like the way you did for me.

I know the roads are narrow.
In your eyes I see the sorrow.
It seems they're not as bright as the way they used to be.

Don't you go there wasting time.
I don't need to tell you one more time.

© Copyright 2002 guile canencia - All Rights Reserved
PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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1 posted 2002-08-08 10:04 PM


I really liked this.
it seemed like a song.
Very deep...

-Sara

moshpit
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2 posted 2002-08-08 10:47 PM


it is a song.. i wrote it after reading this article about a girl who broke up with boyfriend because her boyfriend was a drug addict.. the guy is still cleaning himself up and he visits the girl every now and then..
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3 posted 2002-08-09 02:47 PM


Yep, I can imagine a gently strummed acoustic behind this.


WhileIWasGone
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4 posted 2002-08-09 09:21 PM


Very nice...enjoyed very much.

DeaDiAmore

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5 posted 2002-08-11 07:21 PM


kwel i like it

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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