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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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I've composed the end the burning bright of our love affair. We are in the hot of the burn where the light flickers flickers then crackles into nonexistance all is dark. With meticulous care I composed this so the end like the beginning would be scripted. WhiteRose In truth, what defines us is our poetry. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sigh. No one in my life ever seems to follow the script! I really liked the construct of this--the isolated "flicker" very evocative of the visual..quite effective.  This was a thoughtful bit for me--posed the question of how much of our future is pre-determined--by OURSELVES. nice, nice touch with this! |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Very nice work WhiteRose...Enjoyed. DeaDiAmore |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
very cleverly done If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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