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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
Posts 439
I am everywhere

0 posted 2002-08-07 06:01 PM



If you’d let me open up,
You’d see a world,
Deep inside,
Inside of me.

Past the moon-lit shadows,
Or mysterious blacks.
Deeper than any valley,
Longer than any desert,
More beautiful than any eruption…
So much more than you’d imagine.

If you’re let me speak to you,
You’d see my words,
Are very pure,
Pure and true.

Past the stupid ad-libs,
Or mysterious riddles.
Stronger than any web.
Wiser than any wizard.
More beautiful than any grace…
So much more than you’d imagine.

Just let me?

[This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (08-07-2002 08:52 PM).]

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bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-08-07 06:20 PM


Gentle, questioning and full of doubt and love. , Sara.

"Oh you've got green eyes. Oh you've got blue eyes. Oh you've got grey eyes." -New Order

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
2 posted 2002-08-07 08:44 PM


This is one of your best.

Strong and sturdy

~wranx

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.      

Bukowski

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