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Dark Poetry #3

Yourself

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

0 posted 2002-08-07 05:51 PM

You couldn't think hard enough to be yourself.
You cared too much about Identity, that you've gotten lost in it.

I can't reach you from here.
Come Closer.
QUIT SINKING!

Each move you make sucks you in deeper.

You couldn't think hard enough to be yourself.
You cared too much about idenity, that you've gotten lost in it.
You couldn't be yourself long enough to get noticed...
now look where you are.

You said you knew me enough to love me.
So if you loved me... why didn't you know this would hurt me?

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2002-08-07 05:53 PM

I can relate. And that makes me sad. I know someone who this poem fits to a T. Nice write.

There are a million messages,
in a million bottles,
you just have to know
which one to pull out of the ocean.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-08-07 06:19 PM

You're getting better with your words, PGoD. I really liked this.

"Oh you've got green eyes. Oh you've got blue eyes. Oh you've got grey eyes." -New Order

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