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Dark Poetry #3

Walked Away

MomentzBefore
Junior Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 31

0 posted 2002-07-31 05:51 PM

Not looking back
You walked away
Leaving me with only
A kiss
Why does it have to be this way?
I run
Screaming
Hoping you would look back
But you never did
The winds can blow
Rain can fall
Blood can drip
From my eyez
But you
You will never look back
To see what you've caused
I run
Unable to stop
But still I can't catch up
You're walking too fast
For me to make you look back

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

1 posted 2002-07-31 06:23 PM

This is so sad... sharing the feeling is worse. It's like everything you write are the things I can't describe, but then you do it so well.

Keep expressing,

Sara

MomentzBefore
Junior Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 31

2 posted 2002-07-31 06:39 PM

Thanx Sara...you are sweet...I enjoy your comments and your writtin.....
(lotz of hugs) ;-)

`susan`

shadowsfall
New Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 2
Houston, TX

3 posted 2002-08-01 05:22 AM

beautiful as always, love...

WhileIWasGone
Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

4 posted 2002-08-01 12:35 PM

This is sad....

Enjoyed

DeaDiAmore

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-08-01 12:54 PM

Love the blood tears analogy -- a perfect metaphor for stinging pain.

Said if I only could ...
-KB

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