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LSM
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0 posted 2002-07-29 05:26 PM

Daniel plays with dolls
each one has a name
takes pleasure in controlling them
corrects them when there wrong
at school they laugh at him, tease him
call him freak
mother thinks he’s sensitive
father says he’s queer
no one understands him
no one really cares
power driven by evil
bullets silence the pain
who is laughing?
blood washed with tears
only two dolls left
he asks them why
why did you bring me into this world?
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Syneq
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1 posted 2002-07-29 06:10 PM

strong visualization

Disintegrated to materialize in reformed delight.
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2 posted 2002-07-30 06:27 PM

Damn.

Powerful piece...

~Titus

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