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Silence can drive a sane man mad
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Silence can drive a sane man mad |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Evil caresses my face, as I try to read my skin, my story. Then I see, there isn't one. I drown out your sounds, not regretting what I'd done, I'm sorry. But I can't help you, it's too late. The piercing sound of your cries, make my mind scream, like you. But I can't taste your ... your pain. You sink in deeper, I push you down more. You pull me in. I am lost. All I see is look on your face. Satisfaction. All I know, is what you think. Death. I am deserving. You step away. Look me in the eyes, Then walk away. Speachless...thoughtless...feelingless...mindless That drives me crazy, And that hurts the most... If we follow the invisible line of hatred, it will lead us straight to our hearts..... and pierce. |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
i'm not really sure what it's about but it's beautiful. the way the words sound together i don't know...it just sound really cool. as always i'm not really sure if i can figure this one out on my own...it seems to have multiple meanings. please explain to me...ooo that just gave me an idea for a poem!!! thanks! bye life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Well, what can I say? I write to inspire... LoL.  .Well, it was about a lot of things, of which I'm not sure you've come by yet, or anyone... Anyway, It's kind of about how I think I mean so much, but know deep in my mind (not heart) that I don't mean anything... And then, how when I go to get the attention of a person that I care for (whom I will not name) I do some very stupid things, and act tough ... but then when I let them go, and give up, they don't even say anything... and that's what hurts the most, as I let my facade down... I should have to pretend, but I have... a multiple personality or something. Ha. Well, anyway ... that was probably as hard to understand, as it was to explain. Sometimes, things are better left a mystery... Well, whatever. Thanks for reading. _Sara_ If we follow the invisible line of hatred, it will lead us straight to our hearts..... and pierce. |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
I really like this... humble roughness, or what I should call it. Anyway, I enjoyed reading. "You sink in deeper, I push you down more. You pull me in. I am lost." Nice stanza.. Yours truly ~Broken~ Such griefs with such men well agree, But wherefore, wherefore fall on me ? To be beloved is all I need, And whom I love, I love indeed. S.T.C [This message has been edited by Broken (07-20-2002 09:47 PM).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Hey there miss Sara~ You've went emotion bound with this one and I like it...but can't help wondering at the helplessness? Pave that road yourself hunny...and wander the silence with smiles... enjoyed this!!! take care you! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). |
Silence screams.... wonderful words here. Until ...ali "There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."(C)alibaster |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
yeah...i get what your trying to say! it is hard to explain in a way...i mean there isn't always an easy way of explaining things but like i said before i loved it, mystery or not. silence does really speak. maybe even louder than words sometimes. no, silence doesn't speak, it screams. i could write a poem about that! i think i'm going to except in a different way. i am also going to post my old ones. well anyways here i am blabbing on and on again. i better go. bye! life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I"ve always wondered. . . if silence can make a sane man mad. . . can noise make a mad man sane??? one of life's questions. . . you've answered the other one here. . . keep listening. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Sven, Maybe what can drive a sane man mad, can drive a mad man sane... Ever seen House On Haunted Hill? Maybe you'd get it if you did... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes I have. . . and yes, I get it. . . thanks. . .  ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
PGD, I really like that way you presented the thoughts in this poem! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Phew. Said if I only could ... |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
the title made me immediately think of the tell tale heart... with that in mind, i imagined the insanity gripping harder as the poem went on... enjoyed this. it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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MomentzBefore Junior Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 31 |
Wow!!! I love your emotions and thoughts... -susan- |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Gosh... I never thought I'd get this many replies. I give out a huge 'thank you' to everyone. -Sara- You said you knew me enough to love me. |
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