Dark Poetry #3 |
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Silence |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
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I can see silence. She stares at me without eyes. I can smell silence. Apples cooking underwater. I can taste silence. Whispered stones among shallows. I can touch silence. Pressing plastic keys of type. I can hear silence. She said burn ... together. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH... (just to break the silence) now? LIVEN UP mikey!!! sheesh... ![]() nice mentals here... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Squirrel dude, This is a wondrous piece. But, You're takin' that silence thing a little far. More o' the raucus rodent please. BTW, When I hit the reply button, in just a moment, I'll be kicked to the "old" server. I've only been able to access the "new" late this AM, then not at all till just now. We'll see, Hopin' this ain't a goodbye ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
![]() And the server, since changing, still kicks people off now and again. It has to do with ISPs. Ron knows more about it than I do. Feel free to drop him a message in Bug Swatter, and he can give you a much more technical, and correct, reply. ![]() Said if I only could ... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Not lookin' for techical, t'would be like splainin' Justice to a lawyer. just wouldn't get it! Looks like arytings ai'eet now, tho'. ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Hmm, well this is more like it, in a response to yr own challenge... But Mr. Mope has reared his dreary li'l head again. ![]() *kiss* Be happy. Fr me? Fr you? Fr cool music and cool memories and cool futures. And fr the fact that I will be regaling you with rants about Billy Idol performing live in the Mac Hall as soon as I get home on Wednesday. ![]() Still wish you could go with me to that... Love y' muchly. Sad, gone poetry and all. written in blood before everything went black JCV [This message has been edited by Anvrill (07-29-2002 07:32 PM).] |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
loved the metaphor in the open one but this... yes .....this is the taste of silence as only you can conjure sorry it was baggaged with badness BS I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh...at the risk of wallowing in YOUR misery? gotta smile... grins to all others who read. Y'GOTTA read this one, with Bessie Smith on the headphones. and? oh yeah, billie holiday-- "good-mornin' heart-ache" and let's not forget etta james-- *snaps* , squirrel! ![]() |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
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PoetryIsLife![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Mikey, I like it. *grins* A very piercing, dark piece. Sorry I don't have more then that - I usually don't post short ones like this. Hopefully more next time. ![]() Sincerely, Titus "They say that a hero can save us. I'm not gonna stand here and wait..." |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
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