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gbem1
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since 2002-07-13
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0 posted 2002-07-29 08:54 AM


The Ending Dream
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Stumble onto the edge of twilight
Into the shadows and darkness
I hide

Delve into the unreal catastrophes
Explore the possible trajedies
I confide

Spectate the passions of another's horror
Turn into the light and away from despair
I see

Bleed sweet juices of another's hunger
Carry the body into a rhythmic pace
I flee

Bring the brain back to sanity
Right through the barrier of reality
I awaken

The world is so different
It mentally rips the mind apart from happiness
I am shaken

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bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-07-30 02:46 PM


Wow. That poem was powerful, though "I am shaken" seems anticlimatic after the previous talk of having yr mind ripped out.

Still ... wow.

Said if I only could ...
-KB

gbem1
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since 2002-07-13
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2 posted 2002-07-30 03:12 PM


Thanks, and about the anticlimaticness, it was sort of ment to be that way, but it is hard to explain... I wrote some of it subconsciously in correspondence with what I was feeling.
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