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wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2002-07-29 12:23 PM


Taste of Silence


Palette balm
sooth smooth

Tongue round
silvered over

Placid tastebud
aroma glisten

Spring watered
cool crystal

Goodbye whispers
Late savor

Mouth fresh
splash flavor

Last kiss
Lingers longing
~wranx


The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.      

Bukowski

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brian sites
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usa
1 posted 2002-07-29 12:30 PM


goes down like clear riverwater
thanks wistfulwranx
BS.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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2 posted 2002-07-29 02:23 PM


aw...oh...

now you've done it. grin...you made me wanna write something nice--and funny brian would mention the clear riverwater...for some reason? I was thinking "fly-fishing"

(and the two of you can analyze that one if ya like) heh heh

a pretty kiss of poetry wranx.

devina
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Cali
3 posted 2002-07-29 03:45 PM


Glad to see you got trapped into the challenge too wranx!! (baby jesus KNOWS I'm weak!)

Those silent goodbyes?...you've taken it one step further with the *kiss* of goodbye...

soft and gentle you...I could get used to this man!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



bsquirrel
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4 posted 2002-07-30 02:48 PM


You gone all melancholy and soft on me, wranx. I don't mind.

Said if I only could ...
-KB

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