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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2002-07-27 10:06 PM



What do you see,
In the painting black,
What do shadows,
Make of the dark,

When can you see,
The pale immersion,
Dancing passed black,
offering little light,

What can you see,
Deep in my soul,
Tell me,
For all I see is black,

What can you see,
When light seeps in,
Suddenly bright,
Back in your heart,

What can you see,
In the painting black,
What do the shadows,
Make of the dark.

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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MidnightSon
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1 posted 2002-07-28 06:47 PM


i know what it's like to live in the dark... i guess that's why i hang out in this forum...
painted a picture in the first two stanzas for me...an alley where the streetlight just went out and my eyes trying to adjust...
that's where i read this from.
enjoyed.

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

[This message has been edited by MidnightSon (07-28-2002 06:47 PM).]

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2 posted 2002-07-30 04:12 PM


I have 2 sides 2 me light and dark but sometimes the light blinds me

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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