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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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0 posted 2002-07-29 02:59 AM



on the inside
beating glass
testing durability
you cannot know
for what you ask

summon--
principality

my loins are wet
with demon's birth
I must sacrifice this child..
you cannot know
for what you ask...
reflection of my eyes--reviled.

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EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
1 posted 2002-07-29 09:49 AM


This ones summons up some powerful and dark images.

Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets.  ~Arthur Miller

bsquirrel
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-07-29 11:48 AM


So glad t' see you postin' here, Sen. Uber kuhl poem.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Syneq
Junior Member
since 2002-07-28
Posts 40

3 posted 2002-07-29 04:41 PM


very intense


your lyrically abilities are engaging.


Syneq

Disintegrated to materialize in reformed delight.

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