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A View Much Greater |
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Syneq Junior Member
since 2002-07-28
Posts 40 |
STREAM OF CONSCIOUSNESS ~ dark forest growling claws teeth tearing into flesh fire howling forceful thunder violent winds blood ~ of rain of lighting illuminating the night sky naked drenched bodies lined with crimson streams racing to the parched ground below flesh gnarled and torn giving way desert air bound and blinded and longing for more spirits ripping through the torso like a violent wave of unearthly malevolence the ground giving way to pitch water, swallowing both sight and reason last breath realized one second too late ~ snakes coil about the exposed flesh slowly drifting downward licking at the wounds, lashing at their backs like whips of wire all sight and sound have ceased to be as they were, both maddening and of frequent nature all sensory is put in torpor, slowed and distorted to synchronized with their downfall caught between longing for lashes and the reality of the fresh wounds to resurface or let the pitch overcome the pain is remembered, tasted, and replayed in a monotonous fashion as to indoctrinate a sense of discontent they claw their way through the deep, through the dead, through the calm the snakes gripping their limbs in an attempt to slow their ascension to the reality of the surface the lighting flashes periodically give way to visual conception of the true depth of their doing all which once was and should be is not realization sinks in and the snakes release repulsed by the conclusion they drift upwards, coherency returns as they are pulled from the depths by a force that can only be described as the enemy ~ they have returned to the pain to what they knew to be real, to be truth, not fractured images in pitch the rain falls upon their bloodied bodies once more the fluid trickles down, staining their feet the wounds reopen and the true comfort comes to them "It may be pain, but at least it's real” Disintegrated to materialize in reformed delight. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Welcome here! Dark needs you.  She said burn ... together. |
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Syneq Junior Member
since 2002-07-28
Posts 40 |
Thank you. Disintegrated to materialize in reformed delight. |
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