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Dark Poetry #3

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

0 posted 2002-07-28 04:46 PM

(...Short...)

Wouldn't hate you,
if you didn't hate me,
Wouldn't need you,
if you didn't bait me.
Wouldn't love you,
if you didn't make me.
Wouldn't kill you...
If you didn't break me.

If the world hates you for who you are, and you hate yourself for who are aren't... who do you change for?

iMMuNe
Junior Member

since 2002-07-23

Posts 49
Maine, USA

1 posted 2002-07-28 05:07 PM

Thats very cool Sara. Good job with little words, I like it :P

MidnightSon
Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars

2 posted 2002-07-28 06:29 PM

short and very cool.
intense and a lil play on words...
dig it all the way.

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

LSM
Junior Member

since 2002-07-28

Posts 11
Oregon

3 posted 2002-07-28 06:36 PM

PoeticGoddessOfDepression, I love short poems that just get to the point with power

LSM

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