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shadowsfall New Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 2Houston, TX |
you came to me in my dreams and now i'm... addicted you whispered to my hurt and made it disappear... you left me craving forever but nothing is forever... right? this knife illuminates my way leaving a crimson trail for you and maybe this time we'll get to say goodbye but it's hard to see the hurt in your eyes isn't it difficult to walk away when something really matters? but when numbness sets in and the addiction's lost its beauty you realize that it was hollow just another pain in disguise... |
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MomentzBefore Junior Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 31 |
Deep thoughs of a beautiful mind..... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Shadowsfall, 1st - Welcome to PiP, and "Dark" 2nd - Really liked this piece 3rd - "Cold Turkey" comes to mind (for a title, that is) More, please ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Lemme be the third to welcome you Lauren... Enjoyed this piece...the way you actually answered your own questioning throughout... gotta agree with wranx here.. more!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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iMMuNe Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 49Maine, USA |
Well darn, Wish I got a warm welcome into the forums  |
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Syneq Junior Member
since 2002-07-28
Posts 40 |
it's a hard thing to have loved and lost. it's worse to not love at all. it's a crime to have the veil removed and see what you thought love was as an illusion. Syneq Disintegrated to materialize in reformed delight. |
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