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Dark Poetry #3

Angel of Death

MomentzBefore
Junior Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 31

0 posted 2002-07-24 04:52 PM

A dark-hooded figure stood by her side
In the bloody, soaked mud where she layed
She tried to pretend he wasn't there
She wished he would go away,
He just stood there looking at her,
The expression of grief showed on his face
He was waiting for her to die.
She felt her life's blood gusting out
From the deep wound in her heart
She looked up at the hooded figure
Looking right into the face of death
She knew her time was near
She always knew that she would die young
But this was not in her plans
She wanted to die in a comfortable bed
Not in a hard floor full of blood
She could hear the mournful cries of dying
Reaching out longingly
That can only be silenced by death...

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

1 posted 2002-07-24 05:08 PM

Tragic, yet very impressive...

Thanks for your replies.
You have talent.

I hope you continue to post here.

-Sara

"With poetry and suffering, I cannibalized every ounce of my pain"
-Otep

MIdsummerRain
Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri

2 posted 2002-07-25 03:17 AM

"...The expression of grief showed on his face He was waiting for her to die..."

Tragic indeed...I found this Heartwrenching, felt my own Heart reach out for yours ~May your heart mend quickly~ Rayne

One day Men will look back & say
that I gave birth to the 20th Century
Jack the Ripper ~1888

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