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Dark Poetry #3

Leaving me behind...

akira
Member

since 2002-07-13

Posts 79
Idaho

0 posted 2002-07-23 01:33 AM

Leaving me behind...

Can I hold you now, will my dreams come true
will I finally be able to touch you?

I've dreamed alot along the way
But it is for you I have prayed.

God has sent you into my life, I dont
want to loose you yet as time goes by I fear
I'm going to be forced to say goodbye.

Please tell me you wont let it end
That you will always be more than just a friend.

Because no matter what they say
I'll never truly go away.

Akira
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shadowchild458
Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 117
MN,USA

1 posted 2002-07-23 10:01 AM

i liked this one. you write about a subject that anybody who is human feels in their lives. everyone fears it but it is after all almost always the truth.

life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait

AKJ

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2002-07-25 12:01 PM

really a great poem. I liked it very much.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

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