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Purity
Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

0 posted 2002-07-24 03:21 AM



My how we would laugh!..
But those indian burns and thumped knuckles
not so humorously pained with
their pink glows.
Friendly sparrings would impress
the skin with sore blues.
Tugs of war brought white
puss hills to fingertips.
And now how fun it will be
to burn, bruise and blister
mortality with the attractive
pinks, blues and whites
of those pills you pain yourself
to sleep with.
“Pop-a-bye”...
...Bye, baby

© Copyright 2002 Carrigan Chantz - All Rights Reserved
wranx
Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
1 posted 2002-07-24 08:51 AM


No need to hurry things along, is there?
Another fine write, friend Purity

~wranx

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.      

Bukowski

shadowchild458
Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117
MN,USA
2 posted 2002-07-24 12:26 PM


...their pink glows...

i love that! i love the whole poem it was so good. I am adding this one to my library today too! i already have you in my library but i'm still adding your poems lol i just loved this one!

life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait

AKJ

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