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akira
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0 posted 2002-07-23 01:31 AM



Death and Hate

Death and Hate are part of my fate

Nothing to hide nothing to fear
For I know you wont stay near

I have fought my way to the top
Your wrong if you think I'll stop

You had better take a closer look
Cause what I am is not told of in any book

Death and Hate are part of Fate
Can you handle it before its too late

I have no fears to haunt me
I only pray that you will never want me

Because my fate you can not see I am consumed
With hate and anger meant only for me

To bad you couldnt see that death had a hold of me...

This poem was written my Sophmore year in high school after my boyfriend beat me... I thought that there was no point to life...

Akira
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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1 posted 2002-07-24 12:38 PM


"have fought my way to the top
Your wrong if you think I'll stop"

Sorry about your boyfriend... there is a meaning to life... but it's pretty damn hard to find..

... i hope you'll write here more.
really enjoyed this,
-sara

"With poetry and suffering, I cannibalized every ounce of my pain"
-Otep

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2 posted 2002-07-24 01:13 AM


It is sad that you had to go through that. My mom went through that....and worse....but hope every thing is fine...good write...

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

AndyC
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since 2002-07-22
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3 posted 2002-07-24 11:37 AM


that was a really nice poem. its to bad that your boyfriend beat you.
shadowchild458
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since 2002-07-10
Posts 117
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4 posted 2002-07-24 12:35 PM


akira,
it is so horrible that he did that to you... at least you are free of him now. this is such a wonderful poem and i just love it!

"I have no fears to haunt me
I only pray that you will never want me"

let's hope that nothing like this will ever happen again to you. at least you are able to let it out in poetry though...and in damn good poetry too!

hope to read more!!  

life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait

AKJ

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