Dark Poetry #3 |
Death and Hate |
akira Member
since 2002-07-13
Posts 79Idaho |
Death and Hate Death and Hate are part of my fate Nothing to hide nothing to fear For I know you wont stay near I have fought my way to the top Your wrong if you think I'll stop You had better take a closer look Cause what I am is not told of in any book Death and Hate are part of Fate Can you handle it before its too late I have no fears to haunt me I only pray that you will never want me Because my fate you can not see I am consumed With hate and anger meant only for me To bad you couldnt see that death had a hold of me... This poem was written my Sophmore year in high school after my boyfriend beat me... I thought that there was no point to life... Akira |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
"have fought my way to the top Your wrong if you think I'll stop" Sorry about your boyfriend... there is a meaning to life... but it's pretty damn hard to find.. ... i hope you'll write here more. really enjoyed this, -sara "With poetry and suffering, I cannibalized every ounce of my pain" |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
It is sad that you had to go through that. My mom went through that....and worse....but hope every thing is fine...good write... Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.) |
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AndyC New Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 3 |
that was a really nice poem. its to bad that your boyfriend beat you. |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
akira, it is so horrible that he did that to you... at least you are free of him now. this is such a wonderful poem and i just love it! "I have no fears to haunt me I only pray that you will never want me" let's hope that nothing like this will ever happen again to you. at least you are able to let it out in poetry though...and in damn good poetry too! hope to read more!! life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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