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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
({ I guess this is kind of a competition ... or a little challenge that Shadowchild and I have made ... triggered by a started I made. "Maybe people can die of boredom?" well ... heres goes }) A shifting phase. I'm amazed, at how long this can last. Forever mourning. This is boring, sitting, waiting for you to speak. But this isn't about the silence. Or the mileage, that you stay from me. This is the boredom. That you put me through. I speak aloud,,, not thinking of my words... "can people die of boredom?" You glare at me, I do the same. You speak loud,,, everything clouded... well, nevermind what you said. There were curses, there were loud whines. The boredom is no more... I've started a riot. (as i wrote this... it twisted and turned... and it isn't exactly what I wanted it to be.. but I try not to change my poems... it's hard to understand) "With poetry and suffering, I cannibalized every ounce of my pain" |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
your poem makes me laugh since it is so much like our conversation...lol...no, not lol...lmfao! i love it! i'm adding it to my library! life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
AH! you're right... now that I think of it... it does sound a lot like our conversations.. and... whoa, that's kinda freaky... I didn't even notice it. Well, thanks. I'm glad I made you laugh.  Keep writing. -Sara (i think think yours is better... you speak of blood a lot. i like the part about bleeding red blood, and not blue, and stuff. You're so good with this!) "With poetry and suffering, I cannibalized every ounce of my pain" |
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