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I am everywhere

0 posted 2002-07-24 10:40 PM



We’re always in a fight,
You act like I can’t do
anything right.
You’ve always got to be,
The better person,
If it were a multiple choice
all of the answers would be you.
You’re fool proof.
I’m just an extra.
I’m not needed.

I’m leaving.
I’m going now,
I’m hated,
I’m fake,
Compared to you.
I’m saturated. {in jealousy}
I’m manufactured.
You’re real.
I’m old.
You’re new,
And improved.
Now do you know why I envy you?

(Ah... this is so old)

"Without you, without you, everything falls apart.
Without you, It's not as much fun to pick up the peices." -NinceInchNails

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1 posted 2002-07-25 12:04 PM


This piece was quite nice. I enjoyed it very much.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

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