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Dark Poetry #3

The New Order

gbem1
Junior Member

since 2002-07-13

Posts 13

0 posted 2002-07-20 07:33 AM

The New Order
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Trading lives on an open plain
Competing to prove
A philosophical gain

And yet nothing amounts
On these happy confrontations
Only harrassing Viasages
And weak molestation

To try and find the source
Of the power they hold so dear
You must abandon all hope
And make rise

To the new order

shadowchild458
Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 117
MN,USA

1 posted 2002-07-20 01:39 PM

wow...i loved this. it's so cool! well, i guess that's all i have to say right now but when you really think about it this poem really does have a lot of meaning! keep writing!

life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait

AKJ

Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

2 posted 2002-07-20 09:21 PM

Well written, and it surtenly fits these times.

Yours truly
~Broken~

Such griefs with such men well agree,
But wherefore, wherefore fall on me ?
To be beloved is all I need,
And whom I love, I love indeed.

S.T.C

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

3 posted 2002-07-24 04:18 PM

Very intruiging piece.

"I am not alive enough to kill myself." - Mary Ipal

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