Message from the dark side

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Dark Poetry #3

Message from the dark side

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2002-07-19 01:34 AM

The ground you stand on shakes-
Thunder blot quakes where u rest,
With a nod from my eyes-
Men betray their wives,
A whisper from my mouth,
All hell is about-
Silence remains within a leap-
Locked in my hand, your sanity,
A raise of my brows-
The next thing u know-
Your souls are a feed to crows,
You fear the idea of hell,
Wake up to this reality bell,

I live amongst you-
With each waking of your breath,
My powers produce pulsing wrath,
In your eyes I cannot been seen-
Through your ears I bleed,
Ignore me as a vision,
And all humans shall suffer-
My revision.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

WhileIWasGone
Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

1 posted 2002-07-19 01:48 AM

Very good....I enjoyed your poem very much.

DeaDiAmore

MIdsummerRain
Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri

2 posted 2002-07-19 03:18 AM

"...I live amongst you-
With each waking of your breath,
My powers produce pulsing wrath,
In your eyes I cannot been seen-
Through your ears I bleed,
Ignore me as a vision,
And all humans shall suffer-
My revision..."

Passionate & Spellbounding -What talent you've shown here ~Rayne

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
increases sorrow...
Eccl. 1:18

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

3 posted 2002-07-24 04:21 PM

"Some say the end is near, some say we'll see armagedon soon... I certainly hope we will. I sure could use a vacation from all this..." Interesting piece. Kudos.

"I am not alive enough to kill myself." - Mary Ipal

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