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“Papas Redemption
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“Papas Redemption |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486
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Dream my dreams of the damned whisper the words of darkness that live within your soul “Papas Redemption" You know it is there… In the secret places Over there See the quiet one Huddled up in a ball She knows… Take a peek That one there Scars upon her arms and legs So angry, So angry, Can not find a word to utter She hurts herself The muse writes her words in blood Over there yes to your left See the black pit? Twenty or so little ones are there.. They only whimper faintly What do you say? This is painful for you to look at? Come with me I will show you Painful… Close your eyes Listen Hear the wailing of the infant? 27 years and a day before She has cried that way Never stopping No! I do not want to know! Stop! Stop! . Look, “That little girl” Oh? Her bloody lips and bloody thighs Bothers you? You find it painful To look upon? PLEASE STOP! PLEASE! Come with me, Look See the girl…that lil “whore” I am of your making papa OH LORD, PLEASE STOP THIS I CAN NOT BEAR THIS PAIN… My Soul prayed That someone would help You to understand What you did I am the One Who will show you OH MERCIFUL ONE IN HEAVEN PLEASE STOP THIS PAIN, SO BRUTAL I CAN NOT… Through All Eternity You Will Stand By My Side To Look Upon That Which You Created Papa Mercy? Not for the Little Girl Not for me The same as you Meted out Welcome to Eternity... [This message has been edited by WhileIWasGone (07-19-2002 02:02 AM).] |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Very, very , veeeeeeeeeery good poem. I like the ending... Great work. Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.) |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
WhileIwasgone, This work is a powerful a reclaimation of SELF. I knew someone quite like you, but briefly. ~wranx I have great faith in Humanity...It's just most of the Humans, I'm not too keen on. E.F.Rose |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
blisters to the touch very good BS. I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Thank you all for the gracious replies.... DeaDiAmore |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Shek out wranx...blabbin about...I'm more hush hush...  I'm glad to see this...pain has it's own voice and I know you know... Glad I didn't have to miss you for so long...grins... THIS was better than words I could use to tell you...just KNOW... hugs sweetie!!! Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
I was impressed with this twisted piece. It reminds me of The Divine Comedy and some unknown concentric circle of Hell. I like the inclusion of the masochist and the 'lil whore' as touchstones to the pain. Well written. Kudos. "I am not alive enough to kill myself." - Mary Ipal |
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