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Purity
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

0 posted 2002-07-19 09:34 PM


Another round for me and my friend!
Here, here, cheer, cheer, beer, beer.
Stroke the bruises with something substantiative
The universe of advice in a single glass
It ales what cures you, I tell ya! Amen.
The greatest of companion whose sole request
is the simple lifting of its tab.
It ventures not to gain anything from you,
yet even geniuses swan dive in its splendorous charity.
Another round for me...my friend

© Copyright 2002 Carrigan Chantz - All Rights Reserved
wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
1 posted 2002-07-19 10:58 PM


Cheers! Friend Purity

Don't mind if I do.


~wranx

I have great faith in Humanity...It's just most of the Humans, I'm not too keen on.     E.F.Rose

brian sites
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since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa
2 posted 2002-07-20 02:06 AM


I'll get the next round
a poem after my own heart
well done
thank you
BS.

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

WhileIWasGone
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since 2002-07-18
Posts 486

3 posted 2002-07-20 12:31 PM


Very nice...enjoyed very much.

DeaDiAmore

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
4 posted 2003-07-18 11:39 AM


I'll have another
SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
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Somewhere out there~
5 posted 2003-07-19 01:18 PM


I could visualize someone saying this in a club, and hear the tone in their voice in which the spirit it was said...took me back to my clubbing days! Good spirited write!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
6 posted 2003-07-20 12:13 PM


i got the next round!

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
7 posted 2003-07-25 03:43 AM


Aiy! My love...know what? You need to sit the beer down. and? GRAB A SHOT GLASS!!

*toastin* to ya hun...I love your somber said.

miss you too...

~D

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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