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Dark Poetry #3

Ugly Angry Faces

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2003-07-25 03:30 AM

They seem so draught
One minute fine the next not
Remember what you did
Reddened individual, putrid
Gorgeous in the past
Forgiven and doesnt last

Witness this one cry
Guilty frozen starring eye
An accident ogre kill
This hate inside is real
Not just one in population
Dirty me their speculation

Bah Bah dressed in black
Cheap and from the back
Cleanse me from misfortune strays
Frown on better ways
Another side of me erases
Wear your ugly angry faces

Peeps-Peter
Junior Member

since 2003-07-19

Posts 14

1 posted 2003-07-25 05:28 PM

wow...I found this to get stronger as I read. It had a nice flow. I love the last stanza..great job.
Peter

[This message has been edited by Peeps-Peter (07-25-2003 05:29 PM).]

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2003-07-25 10:35 PM

I'm impressed. Very much so. I could really feel the anger in this. I especially loved the end.
~Lex..

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