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The Tale of Sorrow {an on going work sence 2000}
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The Tale of Sorrow {an on going work sence 2000} |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). 
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The Weeping of Sorrow part 1 of the tale “Sorrow”) Sorrow weeps ageless tears Throughout her timeless years as she wanders endlessly veiled in silent fears. Tattered wings of tissue paper, skin of alabaster and hollow eyes of gray. She remains tangled in the knowing that many will foolishly call her name. Sorrows Mind (part 11 of the tale "Sorrow" the tale) Loneliness slides down the walls as a whisper from her fridged lips falls. Emptiness fills grand mansions of the mind and caresses the skin with slices harshly unkind. Caring freezes itself in motionless time only to mock existence as a skeletal faced mime. Longing drowns in a vast red flood of callous and calculating icy blood. Ponderence upon your question of how she feels reveals only that Sorrow knows to be the depth of what is real. Sorrow Feels (part 111 of the tale “Sorrow”) Pain and longing heartlessly embedded within Her empty shell of beautiful skin As her never-ending journey tears gapping holes In her ever weakening soul. Sew it shut with golden thread Only to observe, with momentary trepidation, The loving stitches shed. Escaping into the catacombs of malicious vindication When Sorrow spews self-inflicted deterioration. Sorrow Longs (part IV of the tale “Sorrow”) Beautiful colors run from her depths dripping slowly from her fridged lips as she catches them gently upon alabaster hand. She laps the leaking soul from her thin fingertips in feeble attempt to replenish the liquid spirals of her empty and forbiddin land. Sighs escape the depths of her caverns coated in stinging icey patterns. Longing for a lovers passionate, warming carress. Ridding amongst loneliness she has nothing left to confess. Pulling gently at her forever present, blackened shroud she weeps tears of endless fire only to have them melt upon the hands of Desire. Here Sorrow mourns entwinded in piercing, blackened repulsion thorns. "There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."(C)alibaster |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
This is absolutely beautiful... I'm in awe.... DeaDiAmore |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
wow, another wonderful poem by you! you always write so wonderfully. you are one of the best poets on this site and i still don't see how you are able to write so beautifully about such hard-to-write-about topics. this is defidently one of my favorites and it just gets better as the verses go on! you should defidently keep writing and don't forget to post ALL of your writing here for me to gush over. life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Gosh... I'm with Shadowchild and whileiwasgone... This is a very beautiful piece. "Here Sorrow mourns entwined in piercing, blackened repulsion thorns." Amazing... How can you think this up? It is absolutely amazing... I, too, am in awe. -Sara If we follow the invisible line of hatred, it will lead us straight to our hearts..... and pierce. |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
hey! i'm in awe too! i just forgot to add it! that makes three people out of three people who are in awe of you! wow you are lucky alibaster! life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Ahhh, Affy. This is done as only you can do it M'girl. Loved this. I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
::: In AwE ::: I want all of this... Please?!?  ~RayneFor in much wisdom is much grief |
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Purple Poet On Wheels Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 145Pittsburgh/Edinboro, PA |
WOW PERFECT |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). |
*in awe of the awe* You are all far far too kind to The Darknesss...are you sure that is such a good thing to do...lol... Am j/k really, I appriciate all of you and your words of kindness and insperation to go on. So that you know, there will be more, I promise, to this. I drag Sorrow out about once a month or so to see what more i can add to her...I am not even sure of how long she will run by the end...heheh maybe she will end up being a complete story all in poetry form...what do you guys think? Some one asked how I can write about such hard to write about subjects...well, actually those are the easy ones to me...tell me to write an honost to true love poem and you would kill me...I know , strange...and damned proud of it...lol. *thanks all of the Sweets with a bow of respect* Until...ali "There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."(C)alibaster "If it doesn't bite, scratch and make you bleed its not worth it"(C)alibaster [This message has been edited by alibaster (07-21-2002 11:32 AM).] |
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