Fan (Not nearly as mentally trivial)

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Fan (Not nearly as mentally trivial)

gbem1
Junior Member

since 2002-07-13

Posts 13

0 posted 2002-07-20 10:15 PM

Fan
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The fan spins, round and round
Cutting off heads
Mutilating Frowns

Its own purpose is unknown
Like that of its maker
World famously reknown

Oh, it does kill
And we do feel it
Every slice, rip, gash, and tear

Every property that disects the living
Every killing blow

And when the fan breaks into a metallic cry
A robotic remorse, an intangible sigh
We know the chaos is over
We have died

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2002-07-21 11:41 AM

interesting idea. A bit goulish I say too... Maybe using some other object to potray it would have been better.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

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