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The Weak Ones |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Repentant greed drinks her dry as she feeds on her cries of boredom… The pain- she jumps head first, far and long, Then tries to hide the stains of thirst in sad songs… Clinging her to starving you grant each their own in substitute… Caress and coddle misery’s neglect sip of lust never mind respect… What happens when her words don’t sound so good anymore? Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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idrift2u Member
since 2002-07-09
Posts 60MD., USA |
Hey, nice, I like, reads well, to the point, no BS, I would like to shop here again... Thanks |
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GoddessofHell Member
since 2002-07-09
Posts 76 |
WOW ...Your poems always amaze me...beautiful! Heather |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Seems like all the exceptional poets post here! *wink* Excellent! ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Once again, and as always I am amazed by your flashing talent. It just keep flowing in. Anyway, thanks for posting. I enjoyed reading. (Was it just me or does this sound a bit like a song?) -PoeticGoddess Sometimes tragedy is the best way... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I just like the idea of cries of boredom for some reason ...  Great one detanya.She said burn ... together. |
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BrandeeM Junior Member
since 2002-05-01
Posts 45 |
Get your arse back here, would ya??? miss you...  |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
You do dark very well, Lady. enjoyed. I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . the other side of you. . . I like it. . . always have. . . great job. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
Simply remarkable (once again) "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Ya'll are too sweet...draggin this one back...*mwah* Want to thank you for the comments and appreciation... idrift2U- thank you for realizing my thrifty word play here..much appreciated Heather- miss you sweets... Tier- oh yah lady...glad *we* are on the same page...big grins... Sara- a song huh? Well I'll let you know if hubby can put this one to music...I'm too lazy to key it out... tyMikey- and how did I know *you* of all people would enjoy the boredom cries..eh? I KNOW...and I agree...smiles... Brandee- laughin at you girl...glad someone misses me...*sigh* with a guilty drip...you know how it is when hubby is off work...I play ~away~ from the puter...sowwy...hugs girlie!! Jenn- why ty hun...didn't realize...you know you get pounced fer cute stuff like that??  John- you ~of all people~ know bout this other side of T...skeery ain't it???  NFN- smiles to you... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... [This message has been edited by devina (07-21-2002 11:10 AM).] |
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