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alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

0 posted 2002-07-19 01:13 PM

There is a darkness that dwells within every soul.
A darkness that gulps you down eagerly until I am full.
I walk in your shadows waiting for your most evil thoughts
drawn to you like light calling softly to fragile moths.
Kicking you in your pure mind
and dancing freely upon the innocence of your kind.
Wrapping thin, cold fingers around your spine
simpley to see where you will drawn the final line
and laugh hysterically in your weeping face
as you stumble from your all mighty grace.
I lurk just behind your plastic, pathetic shivering wall
and thru your putrid, sickening mind I crawl.
Pretend,
pretend
to be what you are...
yet remember,
remember
I never
slumber
all that far.

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."(C)alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch and make you bleed its not worth it"(C)alibaster

WhileIWasGone
Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

1 posted 2002-07-19 01:29 PM

Very Good work....
Enjoyed
DeaDiAmore

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2002-07-19 02:55 PM

You said it..you certainly did, and its all true. Powerful as usual from you.

*Jenn*

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

3 posted 2002-07-20 09:31 PM

"Pretend,
pretend
to be what you are...
yet remember,
remember
I never
slumber
all that far."

What an ending.
Enjoyed..

Yours truly
~Broken~

Such griefs with such men well agree,
But wherefore, wherefore fall on me ?
To be beloved is all I need,
And whom I love, I love indeed.

S.T.C

alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

4 posted 2002-07-21 11:21 AM

Thank you so kindly for your replies...glad that you enjoyed.
Until...ali

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."(C)alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch and make you bleed its not worth it"(C)alibaster

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

5 posted 2002-07-24 04:43 PM

This draws one thing to mind, Joseph Conrad's: Heart of Darkness. Perhaps you have been the one crawling through my mind as of late... stay out or stay low, and no one will ever know.

"I am not alive enough to kill myself." - Mary Ipal

Masked Intruder

Moderator

Senior Member

since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

6 posted 2002-07-26 01:40 AM

*grins* Sneakin in here and not even saying hi!?!? Incredibly not nice of you, not nice at all.

Glad to see you again, affy!

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