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Purity
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

0 posted 2002-07-25 04:42 AM


Ask About “This”

Even the most beautiful of
Straight paths will lead you back
Inevitably to the same
Lousy point you stand now.
So, I ask you, dear friend...
Let’s go this way today

© Copyright 2002 Carrigan Chantz - All Rights Reserved
wranx
Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
1 posted 2002-07-25 07:53 AM


Always like the twisty, turny route myself.
Destination - same

~wranx

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.      

Bukowski

shadowchild458
Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117
MN,USA
2 posted 2002-07-25 10:19 AM


it's like we're all walking in circles just trying to find the path leading out, great poem i loved it...reminds me of school

life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait

AKJ

devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
3 posted 2002-07-25 11:47 PM


and ain't it the truth!! sigh~
me thinks the old boots are tired!!!

enjoyed this view of you sweetie!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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