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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-07-25 08:10 PM

This is a close
that makes me tremble.
A close that
makes me quake.
Wondering inside if again
my hearts only mistake,
will be to trust
to share my soul
to give my all to one,
who'll take that trust
throw it away
and leave me left undone.

Yet, I'm not moving
still here it is I stand,
hoping as I tremble
that you will understand.


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1 posted 2002-07-25 08:33 PM

Pretty sound thoughts if you ask me...I was skeptical to the extreme until I found *the one* so I guess I'm trying to say it's ok to keep your gaurd up...

just let it down when you feel it's worth it!!!

enjoyed your thoughts A...

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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2 posted 2002-07-26 03:02 AM

Just the sight of your username....WhiteRose, illicits so much for me, that my tears continue to fall after reading this beautiful poem! This "close" I totally have a bittersweet friendship with!
And utmost of awe and congratulatory admiration for your finding "the one"... I too have found this "Close One", but patience makes me wait to see that "the one" comes to know, accept and validate this fact. I will be seeking advisement from you both by reading your future postings!!

[This message has been edited by Purity (07-26-2002 03:04 AM).]

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