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Dark Poetry #3

... extinction ...

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

0 posted 2002-07-18 07:34 PM

I hear you yelling,
Maybe crying,
Beneath these wooden floorboards, and a ceiling.
'I hate you so much,
Maybe too much,'
I've told you so many times before, and hurt you.
I can't remember:
what's right or wrong.
To be weak or strong.
I don't want to, either.
I think of you signing,
and then laughing,
As you sign the dreaded paper for the stupid shrink.
How will he help me?
How can he hear me?
If no one cares to listen,
If no one thinks I glisten,
I'm a stupid, tarnished, young, lost girl with problems without a cure.
I need security,
mortality,
simplicity.
But all is UN-existing

If we follow the invisible line of hatred, it will lead us straight to our hearts.

[This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (07-18-2002 09:15 PM).]

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2002-07-19 01:14 AM

Great poem. Nice style.I liked the way you described the emotions in here.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

2 posted 2002-07-19 08:27 PM

Thanks, Xeonox.

I am so messed up right now...
Your reply mean lots to me.

Best to you,
Sara

If we follow the invisible line of hatred, it will lead us straight to our hearts..... and pierce.

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

3 posted 2002-07-24 04:05 PM

Sara,

You are a very talented writer, and I hope you continue to write more pieces. Comment on this situation rather than the piece: I personally think Shrinks are stupid, especially if you don't want to be helped, but you have to do something, even if you want to just let yourself drown. Use your powerful writing as an outlet. Kudos on this piece.

"I am not alive enough to kill myself." - Mary Ipal

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