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Dark Poetry #3

where did the feeling go

EveGnosis
Member

since 2002-02-21

Posts 300
New York, USA

0 posted 2002-07-17 03:16 AM

yes i know
life can bring you down
turn your beautiful smile
into a heart wrenching frown

yes i know
you're doing what you call your best
stepping slowly just in case
our situation chooses "your feet" to molest

yes i know
in times past your best you did show
but with nothing changed i have to ask
where did the feeling go?

yes i know
i'm a bit redundant, and so, lo!
after what we've been through, i ask once more
where did the feeling go?

yes i know
this time you must go slow
but after others walked away from you, you asked
where did the feeling go?

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

sgreybe
Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 209
London, UK

1 posted 2002-07-17 05:21 AM

Dear EveGnosis

Well written!!!
Keep it up.

Sylvia

GoddessofHell
Member

since 2002-07-09

Posts 76

2 posted 2002-07-17 06:25 AM

Just so Beautiful....
Enjoyed very much.

Heather

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2005-04-15 08:03 PM

Hmmm,... the feeling, which one? Everything feel a little different now, thats for sure. Just leave it to God. He's much smarter than I and he has an awesome chain of plans and events and way of doing things so his will for my life will always work out. Just remember he is God and I am not.

-GIS

John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2005-05-13 02:46 AM

I can relate to this one~you must have peeked in my heart~

~ARh

<i><b>"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." </b>

Ace of Crimson Tears
Junior Member

since 2006-03-03

Posts 14
United States

5 posted 2006-04-10 11:44 AM

I loved it. Don't lose your feeling I like reading your work.

~Matt~

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