Dark Poetry #3 |
Purposeless |
PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Emotions are racing back and forth. Yet, I'm forced to live another day. Thoughts of you that I pray, Will leave my hopeless mind today. An adolescent, lost in shadows, of her own imagination. An empty hollow's, been forgotten, no one cares, it happens everyday. But what If that hollow was you? You laugh at me, because i'm different. |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
hey! i liked it! very good! hey, comment on my poetry??? http://www.freedonation.com |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
everyone has been hollow and should never forget that. just reminded me of a chinese proverb what is the useful part of a teacup? the empty part and that question can be applied to a surprising number of things in life. sorry for the preach liked your poem BS. I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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idrift2u Member
since 2002-07-09
Posts 60MD., USA |
or the total mass of the cup which creates the whole |
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blakloks Member
since 2002-06-01
Posts 60 |
yeah, sometimes i feel that no one cares about anybody except themselves. i really liked the last line. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Whoa. She said burn ... together. |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
People do care about themselves first of all and it's sick. I'm one to talk though. *Allison* "Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland." |
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Ace of Crimson Tears Junior Member
since 2006-03-03
Posts 14United States |
That was nice, I can picture what you're talking about. Keep writing I like your work alot. ~Matt~ |
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