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LadyPeach1
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0 posted 2002-12-22 06:28 PM


They always go and break our hearts,
They don't even give a damn,
They will never know how we feel inside,
Men just don't understand,
They say that they love us,
They say that they care,
Whenever they say "I'll be there for you"
They aren't ever there,
They say one thing, then they do another,
They go screw around with other girls thats what they do,
Then they lie to keep there asses covered,
Men always think women are so complicated,
But when guys understand us,
I'll be very anticipated,
They say men are like parking spaces,
All the good ones are taken,
But indeed I could be mistaken,
Cause not all men treat women like crap,
But alot of men do,
Which I know for a fact,
So all the men who want to push us ladies around,
You better be ready, cause were comin' to town,
Were gonna stand up and tell ya'll whats up,
Cause we WILL find us a man that will give us love,
So get preparred,
Let's get ready to rumble,
Cause the ladies are comin',
Oh look, Here comes trouble.
Its us... the women are back to attack.

[This message has been edited by LadyPeach1 (12-22-2002 06:30 PM).]

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-12-22 08:40 PM


LOL at this one. But seriously, I'd rather make love than war anyday. Just can't seem to find the right warrior to rumble with.
LadyPeach1
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2 posted 2002-12-22 11:17 PM


If anyone doesn't like this poem they don't have to reply to it.  This is just the way I feel. LP1
LADY_DEATH
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since 2002-11-29
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3 posted 2002-12-23 05:26 PM


The perspective of this poem should be what an idiot that guy was and how you're much better off!I did however like this poem because of its unique angle.


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