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quik Member
since 2002-11-27
Posts 91Dinwiddie,Virginia |
My thinkings surround me like bumble bees They have no passage way My mind gets stuck as if time has stop But in reality the clock does not stop Freedom from evil Love by angels Happiness set forth And where fire is hot, is back down My gates have now open For gracious prays It now shows the light to freedom |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Not exactly sure what it means, but I like the mad jumble of images. |
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Star T Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 182Philadelphia, US |
hey quik, been looking for u where u been uhn!this was a nice poem something i'd expect from u.u know i'm ur fan for always! merry christmas... |
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LADY_DEATH Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 105Fl |
I liked the reality of your poem.it brings new meaning to the word extraordinary! |
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