Dark Poetry #3 |
goodbye |
Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
This may be my final breath, so I suppose I can try not to cry. It's closing down. This is where I give up. I've never been good at goodbyes. After a while, you begin to learn it isn't always right to try new things, and even if you're going to stubbornly keep it up, maybe you should learn when it's time to recede. I do this to myself too often. I misjudge, mis-step, slip and start falling, and it seems I don't care who I grab on the way. I've never been good at goodbyes. And some things just never change. "Es ist Folter, aber ich bin fast dort." Robert Smith's Torture in Deutsch. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I HATE goodbyes. That's why I never say hello. I feel this one in my bones Anvrill!! Krishankins A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Lori... you and Mikey both have me more than a little worried... I hope all is well... *hugs* ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Anvrill, You can't leave me here alone with these people, They're all scary and bummed out. Hoping this is just, you know...a poem. Not a goodbye ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
It's a goodbye... This was an experiment, and I just feel so small and petty here. Get lots of further proof that I'm not a poet, and just feel displaced in general. :P Buggin' out before more damage can be done on my messed up little psyche. "Es ist Folter, aber ich bin fast dort." Robert Smith's Torture in Deutsch. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ouch .... I hate when I read stuff like that. Mike, stayin' (for his sanity) These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
I liked this Anvrill, very heartfelt here. ~Jess |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
your reply reminds me of the talk I had with myself before I posted here. Nonsense, Anvrill It can be intimidating until you realize everyone here felt like tadpoles at one point (some still do.. Screw 'em! Keep posting please BS. I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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LMNOP New Member
since 2002-07-08
Posts 7NY, USA |
Self engrossed infant sponge of mirroring hate and disgust, annericeican skimble-skamble punctures them were they aggrieve. Nice! Thanks |
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