Dark Poetry #3 |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Circle the middle of the room gritted teeth and clenching fists plotting one another's doom coyote growls and bobcat hiss forget what's sacred, full moon rising hear the warning bell go, "ding" let the skies above keep watching it's a fascinating thing plot the murder of your lover a union never meant to be crazy man & insane mother shall go down in history Who will strike the final blow? who will watch the other bleed? who will be the first to go? both will say, "it won't be me!" ~Tier 7/02 "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (07-06-2002 07:15 PM).] |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
The fate of a love that was never meant to be. I love it!! A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Sounds like the title might be "Mexican Standoff". Or "Let's Get Ready To Rumble" Well, "untitled" does have a certain, how you say?, Je ne sais Quoi. This was a good look into something that, frankly, I never stuck around for. ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
*laughing* so you're a chicken, eh? (teasing) this poem is the result of pure boredom and nothing else... you know what they say about idle minds! ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Well, most of my "lady" friends could hit you with a gin whiskey bottle from 20 paces. ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Hahahahaha! I'll bet! :p ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
What th'? Wranx and Tiersdin holding patter? Anvrill leaving PIP forever? Me without a smile in a message? THE WORLD MUST BE ENDING!!!!!! Enjoyed, Tier. Always. -m. These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
delightfully creepy. it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
my money is on the bobcat arthur |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
*Chuckling* Thanks everyone! ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
*creeping in ever so late* All I can say...is boredom looks good on you from here!!! enjoyed this...plot n all... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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LMNOP New Member
since 2002-07-08
Posts 7NY, USA |
Wow!, it sounded very orange ... |
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