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Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

0 posted 2002-07-06 11:10 PM

Another day enduring pain
Dear God I pray you stop the rain
If the clouds refuse to break
Then take my soul for goodness' sake
I've walked along this dusty road
Alone I bear this awful load
I wish for peace to find me now
And wipe the sweat from my wrinkled brow
My soul is weary, my heart's in decay
I cannot face another day
So God, please hear my woeful cry
And while I sleep, please let me die
Amen

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

1 posted 2002-07-06 11:42 PM

I hope this is another talented work of yours and not your true feelings, Kris...

*hugs*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2002-07-06 11:48 PM

Nice write Kris,
I Ditto Tiersdin on that "hoping that this ain't the way you feel part."

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

3 posted 2002-07-07 01:47 AM

Alot of emotion, hurt, and sadness here. Beautiful piece.
LP1

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-07-07 02:47 AM

Excellent. Makes me want to listen to Brian Wilson singing Lay Down Burden. Sheesh, why do I keep getting musical cues from your work?

I love it.

Mike

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2002-07-07 05:19 AM

no dying in your sleep..ya hear?

Enjoyed.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

6 posted 2002-07-07 03:28 PM

this is good
arthur
well
at least i think it is

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

7 posted 2002-07-08 12:06 PM

interesting peace.
-----
leave me here to suffer
as death comes near,
providing a wishful kiss,
death feeling bliss.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

[This message has been edited by Xeonox (07-08-2002 12:06 AM).]

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

8 posted 2002-07-08 03:38 AM

Kris~
I loved this. I haven't been in here lately but when I went through reading all of the poetry your work just stands out to me. You have a true talent.

~Jess

MidnightSon
Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars

9 posted 2002-07-09 04:12 AM

i've prayed this prayer.
you express the fatigue of life very well here.
enjoyed this much.

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

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