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qtpieelmo
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0 posted 2003-03-27 08:50 PM


HAPPILY EVER AFTER!!
(or so I thought)

Today I marry my best friend.
Tomorrow starts a beginning ‘til the end.
A love undying, never lieing.
Two hearts intertwining.
When you feel the love that we share,
You’ll know the world we’re lost in here.
Where nothing else matters.
Where we live as one.
Happy & free,
Cannot come undone.
Through thick & thin,
Whether big or small.
We’ll make it together,
Can’t possibly fall.
We can greet the world,
Head held high,
Because our strength,
Is always by our side.
When we’re down,
There’s always arms open wide.
To each other,
We can confide.
Dark nights,
When we feel all alone.
We can just roll over,
& a light is shone.
He is my king.
I am his queen.
He was the faceless man,
In my every dream.
My wish has been granted,
Couldn’t ask for more.
The meaning of life,
Has just walked through my door.
Now we’re forever together,
& we both know,
the world’s a better place,
& together we’ll grow!

“Some wishful thinking I guess”

ELMO




[This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (03-27-2003 08:55 PM).]

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-03-28 12:51 PM




(does happy dance) Yay! Oh Katie, are you really getting married tomorrow, cause if you are...CONGRATULATIONS!!! (big hugggsssssssss) I know either way your heart is destined to find true happiness forever, dearest friend, this is lovely, I am not quite sure why this is in Dark Poetry but either way I vote for it, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Katie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Mandie
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2 posted 2003-03-28 10:13 AM


I admire the way you expressed you're love and happiness...I too see the faceless man in my dreams and only hope to be as happy as you seem when I grow old enough to love and marry...great poem!
suthern
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3 posted 2003-03-28 02:12 PM


Wishful thinking or not, it's beautifully written... and where would we be without hope? *G*
qtpieelmo
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
4 posted 2003-03-28 03:14 PM


Awe--Thanx Much!! No I'm not getting married I thought I was soon, but that all melted away with the snow!! I guess that's why I posted it here--cause this poem just makes me sad now. I guess I'll get through it though--I always do, just gotta keep my head up --lol--I still have all of u!! I love this place!!

ELMO

[This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (03-28-2003 03:15 PM).]

SPIRIT
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5 posted 2003-03-28 05:07 PM


Maybe that faceless man in your dreams hasn't plonked himself down in front of you yet. This is a lovely piece and I voted for it. I like your writing.
qtpieelmo
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
6 posted 2003-03-28 05:16 PM


Thanx Spirit--I hope ur right!!

ELMO

SilentFreija
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7 posted 2003-03-31 02:47 PM


beautiful poem...simply beautiful.

Where you look for broken hearts...you'll find me...
mend my broken heart and love me
because I forget how to smile.

SPIRIT
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8 posted 2003-04-06 11:04 PM


Just in here
Bumpity bumping.


Brad Majors
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9 posted 2003-04-07 12:23 PM


Very deserving of book submission
qtpieelmo
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
10 posted 2003-04-07 03:41 PM


Awe thanx for the bump spirit!! & thanx brad 4 replying!! I love this place!!!

ELMO

Justbleu
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11 posted 2003-04-10 06:57 AM


Hope and perseverence can get through a lot....Nicely done!!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


carol
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12 posted 2003-04-13 11:24 PM


I loved this very good

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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