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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2002-06-22 03:23 PM

{repost}

My lover,
shrouded in darkness

Painted streaks of hate
across porcelain
perfection

He wills me to
look at him
boring holes
through my heart

I cared not to see
Pain caused by
bitter words
glaring from once
loving eyes, now
plotting against me

The door to freedom
blocked by tall,
immovable anger

He waits with sadistic
pleasure, eyes gleaming
knowing I will try...

-R.T.
{Tiersdin}
2/00

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (06-22-2002 03:25 PM).]

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-06-22 03:29 PM

This is why it's fun t' write with you now and again. You have great dark thoughts!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2002-06-22 03:50 PM

Thanks dude!

*wink*

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

3 posted 2002-06-22 07:46 PM

so threatening
i can easily picture the situation
arthur

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

4 posted 2002-06-23 12:24 PM

I really liked this, can't put my finger on exactly why.

No matter, might just be because it's good.

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

5 posted 2002-06-23 04:45 PM

"He waits with sadistic pleasure."

For that line alone, I worship this.

And for the rest, too!

Feel my angsty reachiness!

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

6 posted 2002-06-24 12:58 PM

I know those "wills" well... once again, your talent shines, as I've been awed by everything I've read. You are quite the crafter ... Thanks for sharing!

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

7 posted 2003-04-13 08:33 PM

Still can't put my finger on it....still love it

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