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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
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Stakes raised high, of no demise- ‘Tis fashion to be this way, Create a shell, therein ye dwell- Beyond Hope lies false façade. As shadows fall, thy form stands tall- To render his own living grave, Crucify Love’s Tale, with Hate’s sour wail- Be your own man, come judgment day. At rise of dawn, as Heathen’s spawn- You plagiarize good deeds as fronts, Sighing that you must cremate Trust- Obliterate feelings of lust and want. I beg thy remembrance, 'tis one hindrance- You must categorize true worth as so, Before loneliness confiscates life’s grate- Upon refusal to let your heart grow. Outward solidity, inward insecurity- ‘Tis naught but a waste of time, Count yourself worthy, bless security- Think twice, mayhap this be thine... *repost from Open #7 ???* Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
New here, I missed this the first time, really glad you reposted it. ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I liked this. On second thought, I really liked this!  She said burn ... together. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Glad to hear from you wranx... and Mike...how did I know you would??? Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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BrandeeM Junior Member
since 2002-05-01
Posts 45 |
What a message you send her Devina!!! must try my hand at this forum I think!! |
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deep_thought Junior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 24 |
Devina, I read y'r poem 3 times, and each time I found parts I really loved. Well, I'm gonna read it a few more times  "I do not feel obliged to believe that same God who endowed us with sense, reason, and intellect, had intended for us to forgo their use." - Galileo |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
And detanya? Where have you been? And WHEN will we read you again? |
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