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the canyon's yell
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the canyon's yell |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I died here a long time ago. I walk the path again, again. To capture tears that I have wept-- to haunt is but to relive sin... every teardrop made to cry? shall be a tiny answer why... of every mortal question dwell... unanswered...silences in hell. Tell me, someone, in the night, why black is red, and red is white, and why the queen she took the knight-- while every pawn in row took fell. Too bad. How sad. She was not right. A mimic of the words of plight echoed through the canyon's yell? Mispoken words of witches spell. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 01-31-2001).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
HEY! this is great Sista. very strong, very deep, haunting. Loved it. you go girl! Maree  |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Great one! This just flowed along so piecefully every teardrop made to cry? shall be a tiny answer why... of every mortal question dwell... unanswered...silences in hell Wonderful words written!! Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
VERY well written!! this was good!! loved it swamp Do i contradict myself?Very well i contradict myself.I contain multitudes.~walt whitman |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Loved this dark with a wiccan/gothic feel to it!! Great stuff!! Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Bee Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 23Ireland |
Thank you very much for this beautiful piece that carries so much mystery and leaves so much space for imagination. Creates a consciousness in me how fleeting our existence is. Bee |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
That was so good it hurt. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Powerful, Karen.... I died here a long time ago. I walk the path again, again. To capture tears that I have wept-- to haunt is but to relive sin... really provokes my brain!  ~spooky hugsLyra |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Dark, the way it once was....just browsing some friends |
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